I felt a little awkward reading parts of this C.S. because I have asked you in the past for help understanding some parts of your work ( I should probably just give up that hard-headed and literal minded habit) but I just want to be clear that the way you write sings on its own and transcends cognitive understanding. You were never in jeopardy of losing my attention nor my ear, to the contrary, you have a gift that can sing a reader through to the final stanza in a way that I have only begun to re-appreciate recently as I hold and rock my alternately cooing and ranting grandchild to sleep.
You can always ask for help understanding. This piece is more talking about readers giving advice on how to change or alter my work. Which, also, I’m fine with if I am expecting it or asking for it. Someone left a comment on one of my Medium posts that basically started with, “If I could give any advice it would be…” Ooop… I don’t even know the guy!!
I appreciate how you really take time with reading. Also, I’m honored to be a presence alongside a sleeping grandchild.
I like the aggressive dismissiveness in this PAP. A friend asked me yesterday what I would say if I could send one and only one message to the universe. I replied:
“Fuck off - in a plethora of colors and light to the sound of Elgars cello concerto in E minor
Preach your words. Maybe I should write dumb. Great piece. Your writing, your way, your story, your time. Thanks for the read , you always make your stuff hit. Until then, you know what to do.
Writing like this makes enemies. But it also makes loyalists, and loyalists will follow you till you stop breathing. Love it
Thank you George. This is what I need to hear.
it is weird when someone says you shouldn't do this or that in art, that's not how art works. this was lovely btw.
It is weird
Thank you Trevor!
It seems to me you’re doing just fine, and you’re right—it’s not your problem if a reader can’t keep up,
I appreciate you, Paul. Thank you!
Sometimes I can’t keep up. When that happens, I have to sit myself down and give myself a good talking to.
I hear that!!
I felt a little awkward reading parts of this C.S. because I have asked you in the past for help understanding some parts of your work ( I should probably just give up that hard-headed and literal minded habit) but I just want to be clear that the way you write sings on its own and transcends cognitive understanding. You were never in jeopardy of losing my attention nor my ear, to the contrary, you have a gift that can sing a reader through to the final stanza in a way that I have only begun to re-appreciate recently as I hold and rock my alternately cooing and ranting grandchild to sleep.
You can always ask for help understanding. This piece is more talking about readers giving advice on how to change or alter my work. Which, also, I’m fine with if I am expecting it or asking for it. Someone left a comment on one of my Medium posts that basically started with, “If I could give any advice it would be…” Ooop… I don’t even know the guy!!
I appreciate how you really take time with reading. Also, I’m honored to be a presence alongside a sleeping grandchild.
Dope as fuck. Thank you.
Thank you!! Fantastic compliment
doing your substack name justice. this ain't the kiddie pool
Hey! I love this
*slams hands on table* You can lead a horse to water but you can't make em a kelpie type shit, TELL THEM!!!
Love you Delise!
GO EASY ON ME
Allow me to now pet the inside of your skull
Oh my goodness I felt this! Love it!♥️🔥
Thank you so much!
Enchanting, my friend. Thank you for your priceless mystery.
Appreciate you!!
I’m not a fan of the obvious.
You are not obvious and I love your writing for that.
Thank you Zivah. Appreciate you!
Amazing!!!
Thank you so much <3
I like the aggressive dismissiveness in this PAP. A friend asked me yesterday what I would say if I could send one and only one message to the universe. I replied:
“Fuck off - in a plethora of colors and light to the sound of Elgars cello concerto in E minor
Or Elvis
Or Grateful Dead
Hallelujah”
And thank you :)
Well, hallelujah to that
fuckin hell, sister.
Love you til the day I die
Goodness, this is beautiful ♡
Thank you so much!!
Preach your words. Maybe I should write dumb. Great piece. Your writing, your way, your story, your time. Thanks for the read , you always make your stuff hit. Until then, you know what to do.
I appreciate you