short nonfiction
this is so nerdy but I love the way you use punctuation
Nerd away! Thanks 😎
It enhances the description of the emotions being felt so well, doesn’t it? Like each word is said between a shallow breath at times. So well done.
Thank you Kevin
‘But, really, I only ever left the people I loved the most. Because I couldn’t stand to watch them love me less.’
These lines say so much in so few words. Brilliant!
It was a big realization of mine, just this week. Thank you for hearing it.
Big is an understatement! I like how you were able to frame it, while still actually dealing with that realisation. It’s a story within the story about Aidan, bless him. Take care. Great writing.
this is painfully beautiful, thank you for writing and putting this out!
I really appreciate you saying this thank you
Angel ♠️
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"All this, was very loud." - This part hit me so hard.
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this one hurts, thanks for sharing. grief is so so complex and you capture it perfectly. i also adored (and hated) the lines
"But, really, I only ever left the people that I loved the most. Because I couldn’t stand to watch them love me less."
Thank you for reading and responding with intention 🙏
"My regret was an entire wetland set on fire" is the best line I've read today🌻🌻
Thank you so much 🙏 I worked a while on that one actually.
This hits. I’ll have to read your words again later. There’s so many Aidans. May they all rest in peace.
Yes there are. Thank you 🙏
this is so nerdy but I love the way you use punctuation
Nerd away! Thanks 😎
It enhances the description of the emotions being felt so well, doesn’t it? Like each word is said between a shallow breath at times. So well done.
Thank you Kevin
‘But, really, I only ever left the people I loved the most. Because I couldn’t stand to watch them love me less.’
These lines say so much in so few words. Brilliant!
It was a big realization of mine, just this week. Thank you for hearing it.
Big is an understatement! I like how you were able to frame it, while still actually dealing with that realisation. It’s a story within the story about Aidan, bless him. Take care. Great writing.
this is painfully beautiful, thank you for writing and putting this out!
I really appreciate you saying this thank you
Angel ♠️
🙏
"All this, was very loud." - This part hit me so hard.
🖤
🖤🖤🖤
this one hurts, thanks for sharing. grief is so so complex and you capture it perfectly. i also adored (and hated) the lines
"But, really, I only ever left the people that I loved the most. Because I couldn’t stand to watch them love me less."
Thank you for reading and responding with intention 🙏
"My regret was an entire wetland set on fire" is the best line I've read today🌻🌻
Thank you so much 🙏 I worked a while on that one actually.
This hits. I’ll have to read your words again later. There’s so many Aidans. May they all rest in peace.
Yes there are. Thank you 🙏