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Peter Smetanick's avatar

Nice work. I enjoyed the sound of this one in my head. And yeah, killer closing line.

C.S. Mee's avatar

Thank you friend

philosoraptor🦖 (aka Sam)'s avatar

Thanks for sharing this. It's very intimate and also focused on small details in a way I connect with. I appreciate that.

C.S. Mee's avatar

Thank you for reading so thoughtfully

philosoraptor🦖 (aka Sam)'s avatar

Of course, the best way to connect with others is by being sincere and attentive to what they care about. It was apparent that you care a lot.

Sandra Murzin's avatar

Damn,I loved this...so good;your gorgeous writing. That last line especially...💜

C.S. Mee's avatar

Thank you so much Sandra 🖤

Sandra Murzin's avatar

You're so welcome ...💕

Edward.Marlo.Ruiz's avatar

Fucking inspiring writing as always CS. Wow

C.S. Mee's avatar

You’re the best 🙏 Ty

Anna Judd's avatar

Woah, maestra. This one is phenomenal. Bravo

C.S. Mee's avatar

Angel!! Thank you for reading <3

Ulysses Santillan's avatar

This was helpful. Thanks for the read. This captured the memories . Enjoy the day.

C.S. Mee's avatar

Thanks for always reading <3

Ulysses Santillan's avatar

Your writing delivers 🙌.

Stephanie Sweeney's avatar

I loved this line, and all it leaves unsaid: “My grandmother, well, she’s another story but I don’t want to tell that one.”

C.S. Mee's avatar

I was hoping that would stand out for someone 🖤